
1860
painting by Ferdinand Georg Waldmüller (Museum: Bavarian State Painting Collections) wikidata.org
Wandering in the forest, Immersed in a fairy tale She doesn’t know Her destiny is traced In the hands of the unknown He waits with flowers A trap The knife is hidden He counts the seconds The jump A sharp blade Ending the dreams
each tiny step counts the soul is about to fly a fairy tale ends
Joining Tanka Tuesday: Today’s prompt is the photo above, Ekphrastic poem:
“Ekphrastic poems exist to respond to a piece of art critically, analytically, and reverentially.”Ekphrastic poetry explained
Ommigosh… That’s dark, Elizabeth ❤
Well written!
~David
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Thanks David, not all fairy tales have a happy ending!
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Oh! A twist in the tale a twist of the knife very nicely done 💜
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Thanks! Not all fairy tales end with roses 🙂
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Not at all in fact hardly any!
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You definitely twisted the fairy tale!!! haha, this is great!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Wow! Brillint take and I love the twist at the end!
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Thanks so much, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Elizabeth!
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Oh wow, I was not expecting that twist. “A fairy tale ends” is a perfect conclusion to your poem.
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Not all fairy tales need to end perfectly! 🙂
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For sure! I know, iirc some of the Grim(m) ones have pretty awful outcomes.
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🙂
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Such an excellent take on the visual Elizabeth 🙌
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Thanks! 🙂
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If she’d stop faffing with her phone she might actually see him and be prepared! 😉
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Yes, but the distractions nowadays are so many, it’s difficult to pay attention to the path ahead.
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Alright then, Elizabeth! Lol! That was great! I love plot twists. 😉
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks so much, Yvette! 🙂
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Oh dear!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Welcome!
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Ohhh a story poem. I like your take, Elizabeth. Very cool!
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Thanks Colleen, I had a nightmare this night, so I wasn’t in a romantic mood as the photo was supposed to be about. 🙂
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I liked your poem. The young man has a silly look on his face. You did fine. We all see different things. I’m sorry about the nightmare. Strange dreams seem to be going around.
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Intriguing take.
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Thanks Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks for reblogging!
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