
The wheels in my mind go 'round and 'round
'Round and 'round, 'round and 'round
The wheels in my mind go 'round and 'round
anxiety is skyrocketing
My mind goes back and forward
back and forward
My mind goes back and forward
anxiety is skyrocketing
A decision needs to be made
this way or that way
A decision needs to be made
anxiety is skyrocketing
Indecision and what-if
making me crazy
indecision and what-if
anxiety is skyrocketing
Overthinking is stressing me out
nothing is perfect
overthinking is stressing me out
anxiety is skyrocketing
Unstuck and go ahead
ahead and ahead
unstuck and go ahead
anxiety is skyrocketing
W3 – Deanna’s prompt: Mother Goose Muse
For many of us, our first introduction to poetry came through nursery rhymes — those strange, playful, memorable verses we heard long before we understood what poetry even was.
For this week’s W3 challenge, you are invited to use a nursery rhyme as inspiration for an original poem. Your poem does not need to rhyme, and it may be written in any form you choose, but please try to keep it to no more than 24 lines.
You might:
- Incorporate a nursery rhyme character into your poem — as narrator, subject, symbol, or inspiration.
- Borrow or adapt an opening line from a nursery rhyme.
- Simply follow the memory of a rhyme wherever it leads you.
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I like how you used the tune of “The Wheels on the Bus” to show what anxiety feels like, and I really cheered when the ending encouraged moving forward anyway. 😊
~David
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Thanks David, the mind is like a wheel, round and round it goes!
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😁
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hi, Elizabeth❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Artie, is now live until Monday:
Much love,
David
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Your choice of song worked so well for the theme of your poem!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Oh I think I know this one….! 😉 – it’s an earworm… 💞Suzanne
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For sure, difficult to get rid of it! 🙂
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😊💞
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Nicely done! Now I’m wondering if I might start hearing it in my head when I next get stuck trying to make a decision. The comic relief might do some good.
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Thanks Meg! Probably I will hear it too 🙂
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love this Elizabeth- taking a comforting, childhood tune and twisting it into the relentless, exhausting repetition of overthinking🙌
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It’s what the grownups do, complicating everything!:)
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🙌
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I love this Elizabeth. So well done.
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Thanks so much, Kim! 🙂
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Flip a coin!! 🤣🤣
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Yes! 🙂
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