
cocoon
growth in progress
willing to give up, all
loneliness and transformation
bursts out
slowly emerging to the light
acceptance in a breath
wings of freedom
gentle
A butterfly cinquain for W3 prompt: … about gardens, dirt, worms, roots, weeds, and the many things that lie beneath the surface.
You can take this prompt literally and write about gardening or the natural world. Or you can use these images as metaphors for growth, change, discovery, hidden truths, difficult work, things that need tending, or anything else they inspire.
Wherever your imagination takes you, I hope you’ll dig around a bit and see what you uncover.
Length: Up to 14 lines
Form: Any form
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hi, Elizabeth❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Jodi, is live until Monday:
Much love,
David
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hi, Elizabeth❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Benji, is live until next Monday (July 6):
Much love,
David
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I love that you used the butterfly cinquain and made it into a concrete poem as well!! Bravo!
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Elizabeth, I love how your poem shows that real change starts when we choose to let go, making those gentle wings of freedom feel truly earned. ❤
~David
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A cocoon is a magical place. It’s been years since I’ve done it, but we used to collect monarch chrysallises to watch them darken and change. When the butterfly emerged — so amazing!
I love your poem. It brought back many memories.
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Aww. Lovely.
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Thanks Selma!
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Beautifully written Elizabeth 🦋
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Thanks Ange!
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You are welcome 💜
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Lovely!
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Thanks, Kim!
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Your poetry is amazing, I’m amazed how clever your short poems are, so succinct but touching depths. Love this one a lot. 🦋😘
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Thanks so much for the lovely comment, Jane! 🙂
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Lovely poem Elizabeth. 💞
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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You’re most welcome
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