
outside my window the time stops, as a painting majestic bare trees under the golden sunshine a bunny hops without care
Joining Tanka Tuesday
outside my window the time stops, as a painting majestic bare trees under the golden sunshine a bunny hops without care
Joining Tanka Tuesday
Elizabeth this resonates just right, images, ideas, feelings.
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Superb and lovely poem Elizabeth
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Thanks so much, Kamal!
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Always welcome Elizabeth ❤️
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What a great poem, Elizabeth! I love that the bunny pays no attention to your perceptions; it just continues on with its life. Fantastic!
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Thanks Yvette! They show up this time of the year and take over the garden, they don’t care if anyone is around.
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Lovely!
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Thanks Jane!
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A perfect view 💞
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Indeed it’s great, I love to drink my coffee looking at the trees.
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Such a great view 💜
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Thanks! It’s beautiful in all the seasons.
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Lovely poem Elizabeth
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Thanks Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Last line gave me a smile 🙂
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Glad it did! 🙂
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What a sweet carefree tanka, Elizabeth. Beautiful sunshine!
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Thanks Colleen! Happy you liked it!
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks for reblogging!
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Lovely, Elizabeth. “a bunny hops without care” is a beautiful, evocative line. ❤️
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Thanks Gwen, they are everywhere this time of the year!
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