
as I go back to work i'll keep 'gentle' in mind creating boundaries making space for me i'll keep 'gentle' in mind as i talk with people making space for me and respecting our needs as i talk with people i'll be profissional, no feelings attached respecting our needs the lessons will trive i'll be profissional, no feelings attached practical and efficient the lessons will trive and i'll be plenty people will adapt creating boundaries as a lesson for them making space for me W3 :: A pantoum unfolds in four-line stanzas, with each stanza carrying two lines into the next:
- The second line becomes the first line of the next stanza.
- The fourth line becomes the third line of the next stanza.
- Add new lines in the second and fourth positions, letting the repeated lines gather fresh meaning in their new surroundings.
- Continue for as many stanzas as you like. To bring the poem full circle, the final stanza traditionally uses the opening stanza’s third line as its second line, and the poem’s opening line as its closing line.
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hi, Elizabeth❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Heather (sgeoil) is now live:
Much love,
David
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hi, Elizabeth❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Matt Snyder, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Elizabeth, I love how “gentle” holds its ground here, quietly refusing to let kindness mean giving all your space away.
~David
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Such a peacefully positive pantoum!
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You brought it together so well in the last stanza. Brilliant execution!
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Thanks Reena! I love the prompt!
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You did this exceptionally well. Wonderful poetry and quite profound uptake on living in these often opinionated environments.
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Thanks Jude! Your comments are always uplifting!
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Always a pleasure.
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I tried to figure that out and could not! 🙂 You are SO clever!!
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Thanks Jane, I’m smiling now! 🙂
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