
spring brings rain a smile on my face renewed wings flip-flops on no clouds will destroy the joy fly over the pond
This week Tanka Tuesday asks us to write a Shadorma (3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables) using a few specific words. I’ve chosen smile, clouds, spring and wings.
“Flipflops on!” A sign of joy and abandonment in summer. I love this, Elizabeth. 🌷
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Thanks Colleen, can’t wait to flip-flop time, still chilly around here.
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Oh yes… here too, bit I have some windows open. It’s a pleasant 62 degrees F. WOO HOO!
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me too! I zeroed in on that line right away ~ if we’re wearing flip-flops, everything must be okay! 😀
Much love,
David
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Agreed! I always look forward to flip-flop weather… it’s the signal to return to our childhood joys. 🥰
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Yes, to flip-flops! 🙂
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I love the carefreeness of your poem, Elizabeth!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks Yvette! The signs of spring!
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You’ve made me smile! (K)
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Glad I did! 🙂
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Spring rain always sounds like it’s full of energy. Storms are forecast here tomorrow, and high winds. And yes, smile 🙂
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It’s getting warmer here, but still a chilly wind in the afternoons, and of course storm on the way.
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Hi Meg, I have been trying to comment on your posts, last week and today, but a message shows up saying the site isn’t handling comments. 😦
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Thanks for letting me know about the problem! What happened was that an old anti-spam plugin stopped working after a software update. A replacement seems to be working well now.
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Great! 🙂
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I love the joyful feeling of this poem!
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Thanks Luanne! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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