
a breath of fresh air
spring is patiently waiting
the winter's farewell
a breath of fresh air
a season for renewal
flowers, birds, and joy
a breath of fresh air
petals remind me of you
caressing my skin
a breath of fresh air
wakes me up in the morning
to the Earth's party
Tanka Tuesday this week is hosted by the lovely Melissa Lemay, the guidelines are:
For this week’s challenge, we will write our own rensaku:
- I’d like us to write at least three to four haiku or tanka.
- Each poem maintains its autonomy, in that it is not influenced by any other.
- Each poem functions as a stanza in the greater whole. See Shiki’s rensaku verse below.
- Together, all poems have a unifying theme, or are written with regard to an experience or event.
- Don’t forget your kigo! Hint: we are headed into spring! Of course, you will write about whatever season you are in, in your part of the world.
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This is so lovely, Elizabeth. I’m having a heck of a time getting this comment to post on your blog. 🌸
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Thanks so much, Colleen! Glad your comment was posted 🙂
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it’s coming to be the best anticipated party. Spring! Gorgeous words. Thanks dearly. Xo
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Thanks Selma!
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My pleasure
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I love this especially the last verse 💜💜
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Thanks Willow! 🙂
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A pleaseure 💜💜
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Elizabeth, this reads like a gentle meditation on transition, you’ve created a rhythmic, breathing quality that mimics the very subject you’re writing about🙌♥️
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Thanks Ange! Your comment is lovely 🙂
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💕
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Nice write 👏 One breath of spring joy after winter’s long goodbye.
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Yes, I’m ready for spring!
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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