
There is a crack, a crack in everything Unreachable perfection Acceptance is the lesson Don’t dwell on what has passed away distortion now, flawless then Forget your perfect offering Darkness can be a blessing
W3 prompt this week is from Angela, she offers us the poem below to use 2 or 3 lines from it and write our own poem.
Anthem’ lyrics ( Leonard Cohen ) The birds they sang At the break of day Start again I heard them say Don't dwell on what has passed away Or what is yet to be Ah, the wars they will be fought again The holy dove, she will be caught again Bought and sold, and bought again The dove is never free Ring the bells that still can ring Forget your perfect offering There is a crack, a crack in everything That's how the light gets in

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Elizabeth, you definitely captured my philosophy of life in your poem. Plaudits.
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Hi Judy, glad I did, and thanks for visiting! 🙂
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Scintillating poetry, Elizabeth 🖤🖤
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Thanks so much, Jude! 🙂
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Hi, Elizabeth!
MAZAL TOV! Ange has selected you as our “PoW” for this week!
I’ve emailed you at te…er@outlook.com with “next steps” ~ if you haven’t received my email (sometimes they end up in people’s spam folders), please email me directly at:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
Thanks!
Much love,
David
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Hi David! This is exciting! I’m looking forward to read the email 🙂
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🥳
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Dear Elizabeth, there were so many fantastic entries this week, I have had a difficult task in selecting POW, but I kept coming back to this one for me it’s the acknowledgement that sometimes we just have to accept the darkness from it will come light ❤️ – therfore I am so pleased to say you are my Poet of the week 🙌
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Hi Angel! I’m smiling now, so happy my poem has touched you and you have chosen me for the POW. Exciting news! Thanks so much! 🙂
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You are very welcome, well deserved😊
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I love how you used the selected lines Elizabeth, life is indeed full of beautiful imperfections 💞
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Yes, Angel, we need to search for the beauty in the imperfection if we wish to keep going, sometimes the weight is too much, and giving up would be the easiest way.
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I accidentally published mine early from my phone, will add to Mr. Linky soon as I get home (tomorrow) 🙂
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Also accidentally left this comment and linked to the wrong blog, I’m so sorry, I’ll fix it soon as I get to my computer.
I love your poem 💛 ♥️ I apologize for the technical mishaps
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No problem! Thanks so much!
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🙂
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Love this.
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Thanks, Melissa!
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A somber poem that really does incorporate the lines to great effect!
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Thanks so much!
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Yes, it all changes… even if we could be perfect, whatever that means, it wouldn’t stay. I often remind myself that all I need to do is to leave space for improvement, inviting Life to fill it.
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Dear Meg, I love ‘space for improvement’, it’s difficult to admit that there is no perfection, everything has a flaw, it hurts so much when we realize it.
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Very true, and something we often forget. (K)
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We all need this reminder! 🙂
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This one line alone says so much, Elizabeth…
~David
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Yes, David! summarizing my feelings right now.
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“Darkness can be a blessing”
lovely how you end here. 🤍
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Sitting in the darkness is tough but necessary for the healing, glad you liked how I ended the poem.
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indeed… I believe so too.
much enjoyed, Elizabeth 🙏🤍
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🙂
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Beautifully written Elizabeth
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Thanks, Sadje!
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My pleasure
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Your words b͏eaut͏ifully ͏embrac͏e l͏if͏e’s ͏imp͏erf͏ect͏ions, h͏ighl͏ight͏ing th͏e profound truth that ͏in cracks, w͏e d͏iscov͏er th͏e b͏eauty of auth͏ent͏ic͏ity. ͏I onc͏e stood b͏efor͏e a mosa͏ic, ͏each p͏i͏ec͏e un͏iqu͏e, a part of th͏e whol͏e. Th͏e cracks b͏etw͏e͏en th͏em h͏eld a l͏esson – that b͏eauty l͏i͏es not just ͏in p͏erf͏ect͏ion, but ͏in ͏embrac͏ing th͏e ͏imp͏erf͏ect͏ions that shap͏e us. ͏It’s ͏in thos͏e gaps that w͏e f͏ind auth͏ent͏ic͏ity. Look͏ing back, ͏I r͏eal͏iz͏ed that str͏iv͏ing for flawl͏essn͏ess oft͏en bl͏ind͏ed m͏e to l͏if͏e’s r͏ich tap͏estry. ͏it was ͏in acc͏eptanc͏e that ͏I found fr͏e͏edom, a r͏el͏eas͏e from th͏e w͏e͏ight of r͏el͏entl͏ess pursu͏it. Just l͏ik͏e how l͏ight danc͏es through thos͏e mosa͏ic gaps, our journ͏ey sh͏in͏es through our vuln͏erab͏il͏it͏i͏es. ͏it’s a r͏em͏ind͏er that darkn͏ess can ͏ind͏e͏ed b͏e a catalyst for growth, r͏ev͏eal͏ing str͏engths w͏e n͏ev͏er kn͏ew w͏e poss͏ess͏ed. Thank you, for th͏is po͏em that r͏esonat͏es w͏ith d͏epth and w͏isdom.
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Hi Pankaj, thanks for the lovely comment, you’ve really captured the meaning of those words. As I aim for being good and perfect to others more hurt I myself. I’m in a dark place right now, I’m not sure if I want to find a way out or if I should go deeper into it.
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