
Two photo prompts this week: the left image for WDYS and the right one for Tanka Tuesday. I decided to combine both prompts together in a text and a chōka poem.
Once a home, now just a house. The noise from the past clashes with the silence of the present. The memories are held in a trunk waiting for the moment to erupt, looking for freedom.
Winter lies in each corner, the cold and dark creeping into my skin.
She knew I was coming and left me the rose and a cup of water to bring me back to the present moment.
the silence is loud winter lies in each corner the memories wait held in a trunk for so long they scream for freedom she knew I was coming back the rose and water housekeeping is imminent breath in, breath out, be present
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Elizabeth – this is wonderful, and these lines in particular really struck me:
So good!
~David
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Glad you enjoyed it, David! 🙂
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Sometimes the unveiling takes a very deep breath
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Yes, Christine, I agree!
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Both of these capture a moment in time, like a breath. (K)
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Yes, like a breathe! 🙂
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Lovely take on both prompts, Elizabeth.💖
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Thanks, Eugi! 🙂
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Most welcome, Elizabeth!
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🙂
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Love how you included mindfulness in your piece Elizabeth ❤️
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I’m trying to practice mindfulness daily so it was nice a prompt that I could include it. Happy you liked it!
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Fully awake is the person who gets the message set before them. I liked reading this. Excellent– May the messages always bring us to the present. Thanks for sharing, Elizabeth. xoxo
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Thanks, Selma! I believe there are messages everywhere and we only need to be at the right moment to see them.
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Both poems are beautiful well done 💜
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Thanks! 🙂
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I really enjoy the metaphorical language in here. It’s quite beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re very welcome.
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There’s so much in the painting! I think you got some good messages. 💜
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Thanks for sharing it Colleen, the meditation is great too. 🙂
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I really liked the way the speaker pointed out the highlights of the painting. I love still life paintings. The rose tells a story.
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Beautifully done!
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Thanks, Jane! 🙂
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You’ve combined the two images with a beautiful poem Elizabeth. Excellent take. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks so much, Sadje! I thought they would go well together.
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Excellent job
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🙂
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Lovely!
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Thanks, Luanne!
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You’re welcome!
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