
A smear of jam on my white shirt, the school uniform I always complained about.
Now, after many years, better to say, many decades, I miss that time. I miss the lightness portrayed in my memories when the worries were the exams and friendships.
The breakfast and lunch were always ready before and after school, as well as delicious snacks to take with me. Peanut butter and jam were savoured in hurry between laughs and books.
The smear of jam on my white shirt was inevitable.
No worries, the shirt would be washed as soon as I got home.
sprouting memory a forgotten smear of jam shift in the season
Joining Tanka Tuesday – Synonyms only – Change & Grow and have chosen shift and sprouting for the Haiku
Joining Carrot Ranch 99-word challenge – a smear of jam – the text only (99 words)
Clever and beautifully conveyed, Elizabeth ❤
Sincerely,
David
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Thanks, David!
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Beautiful. It’s subtle and does take you back.💖
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Thanks, Jude!
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Awww, what a lovely haibun! Made me feel nostalgic.
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Glad you liked it!
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Love this and the nostalgia it conveys. Haibuns are my favorite syllabic form. I did one, too, this week.
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It’s a great poetry form. Thanks, Luanne!
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You’re welcome!
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I love the combination of 99 words and the poem. Such dimple times in that jam.
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Some weeks the prompts match each other!
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Yes, life was so much simpler then…
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You said it right! Simple is the word!
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Lovely…a smear of jam. Oh yes… 😊
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Thanks, Gwen!
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Lovely memories…but I think you savored it at the time as well. (K)
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no pun intended? 😉
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Never.
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Yes, for sure! 🙂
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This was great, Elizabeth! I love how you combined the Tanka Tuesday with the 99-word story! Very clever!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks, Yvette! Both prompts complemented each other.
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Why is it that so many things can only be appreciated in retrospect?
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I think each day things get more complicated, so looking back the past stuff seems simple.
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May be!
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Love this nostalgic post
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Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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What a great memory from a smear of jam! This was fabulous, Elizabeth!
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Thanks, Colleen! It was the first thing that came to my mind! 🙂
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Clever you!! 🙂
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Thanks, Jane! 🙂
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