
the mind
with its secrets
white matter, brown matter
wired in power and connections
a breath
one minute here, another there
losing the sense and space
fluttering wings
fading
Colleen’s prompt this week is to write a Cinquain or a variation of it. I’ve chosen my favourite form, the Butterfly cinquain (a nine-line syllabic titled form with the pattern 2-4-6-8-2-8-6-4-2).
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Your butterfly cinquain is perfect, Elizabeth. I love the second cinquain because it makes the life of a butterfly so complete. 💜
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Thanks so much, Colleen! One of my favourite forms 🙂
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Beautiful poem, Elizabeth!
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Thanks, Yvette!
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Oh my, I love your beautiful poem.
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Thanks, Gwen!
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Clever and beautiful words!
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Thanks, Jane!
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poignantly beautiful, Elizabeth…🤍
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Thanks, Destiny!
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A very lovely piece, Elizabeth 👍☺️
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Thanks, Aptivi!
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You’re welcome, Elizabeth!
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