
my first car, a Beetle, yes a Beetle
blue, shining and proud, smiling out loud
all iron for strength, in all the length
leather for comfort, letting go of all discomfort
i saved each cent, lots of bent
just a dream in the beginning, my head was spinning
as the money pile grew, everything blue
I saw the possibility, only stability
the freedom of going, and glowing
my own wheels, no more in my heels
i miss you, my little bug, only a hug
W3 -I. O’Nika’s prompt: Echo verse
This week, let’s play with rhyme and repetition by writing an echo poem about firsts.
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Such a cute poem Elizabeth. Lovely 🌹
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Such beautiful emotion for one’s first car. very real.✍✨
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Aw, sweet and bittersweet at the same time
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Love your echo poem! Very nice. Cute bug too. Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks you, Nika! Your prompt is great!
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Cute bug
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Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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I had a Triumph Herald, don’t think that would work! 🤣
Great wordiage as always Elizaabeth.
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Oh, a cute one! We were cool girls that time 🙂
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We still are! 😀
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Yes! 🙂
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