
beneath the layers
the river whispers to me
renewal draws near
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beneath the layers
the river whispers to me
renewal draws near
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Dear Elisabeth, I’m so sorry to say that I was not able to participate at (?, or on? I’m to tired to look it up) your promt for the W3 despite I really liked the theme of self love! I tried to write something but failed to befriend the sonnet. So, please know I really, really loved your prompt! All the best Svenja
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Don’t worry, my dear! It’s an easy form, but I thought it would go well with ‘love’. I completely understand you. Take care!
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❤️❤️❤️
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I really like your use of personification in this verse, Elizabeth! ❤
~David
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Thanks David! 🙂
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Congratulations. Nature always talks to us if we bother to notice.
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Thanks Indira! It’s so simple to pay attention to nature, but we are always busy and in hurry to stop and pay attention.
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You are welcome, dear.
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❤️❤️
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You are very welcome!
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Congratulations! I have chosen you as the next Poet of the Week! I’m looking forward to your prompt!
All the best
Svenja
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Thanks so much, Svenja! I’m so happy you enjoyed it! 🙂
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isn’t it just amazing how we know that. Nature 👏🏽 thanks. Lovely
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yes, nature knows how to talk with us!
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😊😊
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Delightful Elizabeth! A whisper that soon will become a soaring song!!
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Yes, you are right, the currents are getting stronger day by day!
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Indeed! We hit 54F today and it is climbing all week!
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I can hear it. (K)
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Happy you can! It’s wonderful!
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Welcome Elizabeth
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Beautiful combination Elizabeth.
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Thanks Jane!
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Wonderful poem Elizabeth.
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Thanks, Kamal!
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Lovely layers! The river is melting here, too. It won’t be rowable for a while, but it’s still good to see.
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Nature’s sculptures! We see shapes, like the in the clouds, when we put our imagination to work.
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Very beautiful 💗
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Thanks, Lesley! 🙂
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Beautiful! I like especially that the layers in your poem correspond with the layers of ice in the pictures! Well done!
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Thanks, yes, it was intentional. I’ve many photos of the ice in there, but I love the layers of this one.
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You certainly captured the heart of a haiga in my opinion. 🩵
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A beautiful poem Elizabeth.
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Thanks Sadje, I love to walk by this river and listen to the sound of the water now that the ice is melting.
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You’re welcome. A beautiful walk
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