
First time joining WDYS – What do you see challenge from Sadje. I’m joining with a free poetry form. This photo is so exquisite and I couldn’t resist when I saw it on my feed. The words just needed to be written. Hope you enjoy!
the bride thought it better the forest, the moss the songs exhaling from the trees the birds and the butterflies too late for the groom only the veil lays on the stream following the flow of a dream
Wonderful evocative choice of words.
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thanks Judei, glad you liked it!
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Lovely words – I can see the veil floating on the water!
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Thanks, Chris! Glad you can see the veil, it was the first thing that came to my mind when I saw the photo!
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I can see why the photo inspired you. It’s so evocative. and your poem flows like magic Elizabeth. Like something taken from a Shakespearean play.
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Oh, Gina! Thanks for the wonderful thoughts, I’m smiling now! 🙂
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Quite beautiful.
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Thanks, glad you liked it! 🙂
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🙂
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A natural beauty, well done.
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Thanks so much, Mason!
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Beautiful, dream like poem. Thanks Elizabeth for joining in.
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Thanks, Sadje! 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Very nicely done!
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Thanks, Jane! 🙂
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