
Midnight stirs
Dazzled by the past
Brightest light
Without ground to stead
Balance nowhere to be found
Fluttering always
Tanka Tuesday words for this week are: Enchant and Fly, synonyms only! I opted for Shadorma (3/5/3/57/5 lines) and the words Dazzled and Fluttering.
Hope you enjoyed it, this little poem expresses my feeling these last days.
Beautiful imagery!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome 😇
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Lovely Tanka, Elizabeth! I love your use of the prompt words. Happy Friday! 😀 xo
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Thanks Vashti! Happy weekend to you!
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Sad flowers, but a beautiful photo.
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I love to watch the transformation. Thanks!
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Beautiful words and picture.
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Thanks dear, they express my feelings well!
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Oh, Elizabeth. It’s the changing of the seasons; you must be feeling. I feel your sadness in your poem. It’s that fall time of year. Your “like” button has disappeared. Is WP messing around again?
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I try to be always in the present moment, do you know? The ‘here and now’! It isn’t easy, you are right, the change of seasons can be tough!
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I try too, Elizabeth. ❤️❤️❤️
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I’ll check the like what is going on with the like button! Thanks for letting me know!
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It’s crazy! I keep changing themes trying to find one that works. 😱
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