
blue immensity
from the skies to the oceans
you have all my heart
wondering what is hidden
beyond treasures and despair
it’s time for tanka tuesday, our own choice of words, for today i’ve chosen heart and despair.
i took this photo last week, the sky was so blue, no clouds around. i was waiting outdoors for my son to give me a ride and i was wondering what is beyond all this blue. not about the universe, planets, atmosphere and stuff, but about the mystery, the magic, what is there that we can’t see?
i wasn’t sure if it is appropriate to make a haiga using a tanka, instead a haiku, but i had more words and it wouldn’t fit as haiku, they needed to be written.
hope you have a great day!
Gorgeous blue sky! Love your Haiga, Elizabeth. ❤
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Yes, there is so much more beyond what our culture tells us. This poem touched the part of me that longs for awe and mystery, reminding me how essential such feelings are to living wholeheartedly. So lovely — both the blue and the poem.
And yes, sometimes more words just need to be written 🙂
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thanks so much Meg, for the lovely comment, i’m glad it has touched you!
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I loved reading your train of thought and then rereading the poem. Beautiful…
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Thanks so much Violet, happy you enjoy it!
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Wonderful capture and lovely lines. We really need change in shade, from gray to blue.
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oh yes! welcome blue skies! enough of gray!
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That sky is such a deep blue, Elizabeth! I love reading your poetry each week. : ) xo
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Dear Grace, I’m so glad the blue sky is back here, enough of grey and heavy clouds around here. Love and hugs to you!
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