
Sky, ocean; mixing and matching
Sand, salt; scrubbing my feet
Fluffy
Breeze touching my face; caressing
My golden skin; wild sweet
Gushy
Shells; many of them, adornment
Fish; a colorful splash
Sunbathe
Pina colada; agreement
Palm trees; please, have a bash
Fresh breathe
First time joining David’s W3 challenge. This week the prompt is to write a Memento poem:
A ‘memento’ is a poem about a holiday or an anniversary, consisting of two stanzas. Each of the two stanzas is:
Six lines;
Syllabic: 8-6-2-8-6-2;
Rhyming: a/b/c/a/b/c.
So joyful and fresh. Enchanting 💖
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Thanks so much!
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Love it!
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Thanks, Paula!
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That’s such a good poem, succinct and emotive!
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Glad you liked it, Jane! 🙂
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Nice.
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Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Lovely poem 💕
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Thanks! 🙂
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Beautiful and lovely poem with an apt picture, Elizabeth.
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Thanks so much, Kamal!
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You are always welcome dear Elizabeth 🙏🏻
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Hi Elizabeth
I’ve got one stanza too…
but what I have read thus far is absolutely stunning
Will check again a little later. 🤍🙏
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Thanks so much, Destiny! I’ve uploaded it again, hope is ok now!
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I see both now.
so very lovely, Elizabeth. 🤍
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Glad it is fixed! Thanks so much!
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I’m seeing both stanzas on my mobile. You must have had a lovely holiday indeed 😊
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Technology is so wonky sometimes… I can see them both too now! 🤷🏻♂️
~David
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I uploaded it again! Hope it is OK now.
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I was remembering a trip to the Cayman Island many years ago, it was like a dream!
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks fo reblogging!
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Ommigosh, Elizabeth, this is sheer loveliness. It’s so wonderful to have you join W3 too 😃
For some reason, my browser is only showing one stanza… I’ll try it again on my computer later!
Much love,
David
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Thanks so much, David! It’s a pleasure to join your challenge! 🙂
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Elizabeth ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by l'il ol' me, is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Great! Thanks so much for letting me know! 🙂
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*hug*
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