
one minute you are six in the next, sixty interval in between are filled with moments tiny moments of joy moments of worry tiny moments of smiles moments of sadness all of them constitute whole body and soul with each bit of them be your own being
Tanka Tuesday this week is in commemoration of Colleen’s 65th birthday. She asked us to write our own poetry form using 65 syllables. The form I created contains 3 stanzas: the first and second 6-5-6-5 and the third one 6-5-5-5. I’m naming it Boomer!
The tulips are for Colleen! Happy Birthday!
Elizabeth, this so lovely! But I have to say that the name of this new form is particularly entertaining to me! 😀
Much love,
David
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Thanks David! Yes, it’s a boomer! 🙂
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Elizabeth, thank you so much! What a great form. This is one we can all write. I love it! ❤️
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Welcome Colleen, yes, simplicity is my thing! Happy you liked it!
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Oh, yes, my friend. I’m right there with you! ❤️
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what a beautiful poem, and tribute!
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Thanks Michelle! 🙂
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So true …love it 💜
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Thanks! 🙂
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Insightful poem, Elizabeth 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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Boomer…LOL! I love it, Elizabeth! Your poem is great!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks so much, Yvette! 🙂
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I love the movement of time in your poem. Beautiful, Elizabeth. 😊
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Thanks Gwen, time indeed flies!
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Those moments that are so beautiful and lovely. Nice poem
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Each moment is a lesson, and it’s up to us accept the knowledge or not.
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Yes absolutely
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It’s amazing that six to sixty thing. The boomer is perfect and as lovely as the tulips.
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Thanks! Glad you liked them! 🙂
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Those tiny moments add up fast! Beautiful tulips. 🙂
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Yes, Meg! And we learn so much during all the time.
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Nailed it!
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Thanks Jane! 🙂
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It the truth. Lovely
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Thanks Sadje, I was just thinking how much we learn during the time, how time shapes us.
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Indeed, and I think that’s the aim of life
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Neat name and it looks good on the page.
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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You’re very welcome.
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