
blue and yellow blast i'm lost in a field of dreams edge of the abyss i look at my hands the tiny emerald ring roots me to the earth it's time to grow and renew the grass dancing with the breeze
Is anyone else feeling at the edge of the abyss? This winter has been so long and the creativity muse has left. Finally, this week the outdoors grey is giving some space for the sunshine and I’m starting to reclaim my creativity.
Tanka Tuesday this week is colours of the rainbow, green. My poem, consisting of a haiku and a tanka, intentionally doesn’t have the word green in it, but it has ‘green’ all over it. Hope you enjoy it!
It’s hard to feel creative when it seems like the whole world has been sliding into an abyss. Glad you are hanging in there. 🙂
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Hope things get better now with the arrival of spring!
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beautiful poetry. no winter season where i am, but the abyss occasionally comes within sight. i have sometimes written my way into it, and other times i write my way out.
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I like the idea of writing about it, in or out! The abyss is inside our mind, the weather can play a role but it’s the way you answer to it that matters.
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I wish my journals were as appealing as yours.
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Thanks, Lulu! I love to have beautiful pages.
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Your journal is always gorgeous, Elizabeth; just like your poetry. I like your take on spring! I’m ready too… but Michigan spring is roaring like a lion with high winds and more snow coming our way. We had the perfect day yesterday, and I actually had the opportunity for a walk. It was great fun! ❤
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Thanks, Colleen! We had a nice weekend, but today the cold weather is back 😦
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Same for us. I’m ready for spring! 🍀💚🍀
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I enjoyed your poem, Elizabeth. My favorite line is “it’s time to grow and renew.” I don’t experience the winter gray down here in South Florida, but I can connect to the muse going mute. I’m happy your creativity is returning. 🙂
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Thanks, Yvette! Some winters are tough than others, and this is has been a non-creative one for me.
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Spring is on the move northward. Good poem with each line capturing an aspect of spring.
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Hope it arrives here soon, we are having more snow today! 😦
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Lovely poem. Yes the abyss is in my mind too.
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Thanks Jane! Now, the questions is: Should we jump or hang in there?
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I love your poem, Elizabeth, and your journal looks really awesome!
-David
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Thanks, David! I love to write on pretty pages.
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