
a breath seeking closure a shift at the moment hidden beneath leaves and branches being
This week Tanka Tuesday is synonyms only! The words are life and move, I’ve chosen being and shift for a Cinquain poem: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables.
a breath seeking closure a shift at the moment hidden beneath leaves and branches being
This week Tanka Tuesday is synonyms only! The words are life and move, I’ve chosen being and shift for a Cinquain poem: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables.
Lovely Elizabeth…thank you.
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Thank you! 🙂
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What a lovely spot, Elizabeth. I love the end of your cinquain… just being, is the perfect mindfulness reminder we all need. Well done. ❤
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Thanks, Colleen! It’s a blessing to have this spot so close to home.
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Exactly. We need those places. 🌸
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This one really works Elizabeth. Great image and a place to be! 🙂
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Thanks, Marje! I’m lucky to have this spot so close to home!
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How lovely. ❤
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Wow, looks so perfect for poetry. 🌷
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Thanks, Jude!
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This makes me think of spring and the stirring of life. Nicely done!
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Yes, everything about spring! Thanks!
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A lovely spot, and the poem left me feeling at peace with life always moving on 🙂
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Hi Meg, this spot is almost in front of my home, it’s a perfect escape for reading and writing. Glad you felt peace reading the poem!
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Very nice, place and words.
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Thanks, Jane! I was inspired!
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A beautiful image of a simple place for creating meaningful words. Well done, Elizabeth.
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This place is really nice and secluded, perfect for writing and have a moment of peace.
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