
bonfire wakes up the senses, wild-self alive
the fields shine with her brilliance
each corner a surprise
I’ve written a kimo poem (10-7-6 syllables) inspired by Colleen for Tanka Tuesday. This week the prompt choosen by the lovely Willow is the October Hunter’s Moon or the aging of the year.
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very cool! 🖤🧡
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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you’re super welcome!!
Best wishes, Linda xx
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Lovely!
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Autumn bonfires bring the season alive! Just think, if we could stare into the flames, all the poems that would come alive! This is beautiful, Elizabeth. 🍁
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Oh, yes! The dance of the flame and the wood fragrance would be super inspiring! 🙂
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I really like how “bonfire wakes up the senses” captures that primal spark of autumn nights — such vivid energy in just a few lines!
~David
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Thanks David, a bonfire is inspiring!
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☺️
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this is evocative of the prompt, I really like it 💜💜
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I’m happy you like it, Willow! The prompt was great!
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Glad you liked the prompt you did it proud 💜💜
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🙂
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Love it!
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That’s great, Jane! 🙂
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Beautiful poem 💖
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Thanks Sammi!
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A lovely poem
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Thanks Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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