Nature– such a good looker! and you wrote her a lovely poem. Thanks so much for sharing it here. Stupendously lovely. Be well, Elizabeth. I wish you miracles.
I see petals as letters falling to the ground to ‘write’ cryptic verse where they land 😀
I enjoy walking in a petal ‘storm’. Sometimes thinking – I’m glad these petals aren’t cold snowflakes 🙂
I do see the same “word” similarities, Elizabeth showing opposite reactions to the same event. I love your photo and poem. I think we dwell in both moments.
Elizabeth, “Thoughts and pen falling apart.” I pictured pieces of both lying on the blank paper like petals around the rose bush. But that couldn’t have been what you meant. Then I imagined your thoughts dripping into words which flowed from your pen, sticking to the paper. leaving both the thought and the pen behind and ready to begin a new life of their own.
Very different than what I imagined, but I did exactly what you were thinking. I wrote down my scattered thoughts about the poem, not knowing if they were correct, but just as they hit me. It was a fun way to engage with the poem. Not all poems engage me that much, but for some reason those words lit a fire under me. Isn’t it interesting which words spark conversations? This was a great post, Elizabeth because days later I still remember exactly what I was thinking when I read your words. Kuddos! 🙂
Lovely Tanka and image Elizabeth.. thank you..
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Oh, my gosh! I’m so glad you’re back and writing again. I love the image and your lovely tanka. That last line is superb! ❤
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Thanks so much, Colleen! You made me smile now! 🙂
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Perfect! 😍🌸
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There is a fragility in this I like. 🙂
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Yes, my raw feelings at that moment!
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Nature– such a good looker! and you wrote her a lovely poem. Thanks so much for sharing it here. Stupendously lovely. Be well, Elizabeth. I wish you miracles.
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Thanks Selma for the lovely comment! Miracles on your way too!
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beautiful!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Spring is such a giver of beauty. Just gorgeous.
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Thanks, Suzanne!
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I see petals as letters falling to the ground to ‘write’ cryptic verse where they land 😀
I enjoy walking in a petal ‘storm’. Sometimes thinking – I’m glad these petals aren’t cold snowflakes 🙂
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Yes, Jules! You got it! Thoughts as petals, happy spring!
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Most of the petals are gone, now I’ve got the maple seed helicopters – so fun to watch them twirl!
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They are here too, I enjoy to watch them as well!
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I do see the same “word” similarities, Elizabeth showing opposite reactions to the same event. I love your photo and poem. I think we dwell in both moments.
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I was surprised when I read yours, love this synchronization!
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Me too!
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Elizabeth, “Thoughts and pen falling apart.” I pictured pieces of both lying on the blank paper like petals around the rose bush. But that couldn’t have been what you meant. Then I imagined your thoughts dripping into words which flowed from your pen, sticking to the paper. leaving both the thought and the pen behind and ready to begin a new life of their own.
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Hi Marsha, I’m so happy that this tiny poem has made your imagination fly between thoughts and words. Love both descriptions!
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So what were your thoughts as you wrote it. Was I even close?
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All about scattered thoughts, not easy to lay down on the paper. 🙂
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Very different than what I imagined, but I did exactly what you were thinking. I wrote down my scattered thoughts about the poem, not knowing if they were correct, but just as they hit me. It was a fun way to engage with the poem. Not all poems engage me that much, but for some reason those words lit a fire under me. Isn’t it interesting which words spark conversations? This was a great post, Elizabeth because days later I still remember exactly what I was thinking when I read your words. Kuddos! 🙂
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Hi Marsha, I’m so happy that it has really touched you! I know, sometimes the synchronization is strong and we feel the power of the connection.
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Yes, indeed! 🙂
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Elizabeth–such a beautiful photo!
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Thanks, Lois!
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Great combinaation of words and picture.
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Thanks, Jane!
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